Experimental Wolves

Once upon a time, oh, about 20 years ago, blogs took the online world by storm and dominated the way many people interacted with the internet (beyond looking up information). It was a beautiful time to be someone who enjoyed writing or reading longform creative nonfiction.

I followed several blogs closely and others more casually. Some were about something. Sewing, quilting, vintage patterns, crochet mandalas. Some were more general in content, but they attracted me with their beautiful photos and distinctive voice. Some were humorous or whimsical. Some were aspirational. All of the writers felt like friends. All of them developed a community around their writing of frequent commenters that began to feel a bit like the various groups of people who hung out together at school. They were people you wished you could hang out with in real life. But at least you got to see them online.

Then came Facebook. And Instagram. And Twitter. And people stopped reading and sharing blogs in favor of quick dopamine hits from likes and retweets. Those of us who blogged started linking to our longform writing on our social media platforms of choice to remind people we were still writing. Nevertheless, the readership dropped.

Algorithms preferred posts that didn’t include links that would lead people away from the platform they were on. The community splintered. Blogs went quiet. And we all settled in for a decade of inanity and cat videos and a constant bombardment of political tirades and advertisements for chintzy products that would be shipped, eventually, from China and then turn out to be something other/worse than what we ordered.

And then…Substack appeared.

Substack, it seems, is filling in the void that shuttered blogs left behind. When I first became aware of the platform several years ago, I immediately thought, “I want to start a Substack.” But I wasn’t sure what it would be about. So I waited. And waited. And waited.

Until finally a few wisps of ideas coalesced into something a bit more tangible. Thus was born Experimental Wolves.

Experimental Wolves is my attempt at reestablishing the kind of writing and the kind of community I enjoyed before I was so busy with feeding the publishing machine. Before I was encouraged to build a following on social media. Before I lived on my stupid phone.

It’s my opportunity to write some longform nonfiction that encourages writers at any stage of their career and offers a behind-the-scenes look at the life of a working writer. It’s also my opportunity to do some teaching and prompting for writers who are just starting out, who a busy or blocked, or who want to brainstorm with other writers but haven’t found a local writing group that suits them.

I’ve run into many such writers when a speak at conferences, libraries, and bookstores. Folks who know they want to write but feel a bit at a loss about how to grow or share what they’re doing now. Experimental Wolves is one way for us to all get together online and build a community.

If you’re a writer who used to read this blog (when I was actually blogging regularly) I encourage you to read the first post and give it a try. There are both free and paid subscriptions, so you can try it out at no cost and see if it’s something that feeds your muse or gives you a bit of motivation or encouragement on the journey. If you want to join in “the pack” of paid subscribers, that will get you access to special content, including weekly writing prompts and ideas to keep you writing, even when you’re in a dry spell.

I hope you’ll join me on Substack as we build a supportive, generous, and kind community of writers!

 

Celebrate Women’s Fiction Day with Events and Giveaways!

June 8th is Women’s Fiction Day! If you follow me on Facebook or Instagram, you’ll be seeing a lot about Women’s Fiction Day this week, including great authors you’ll want to follow, books to add to your TBR list, special events, and LOTS of amazing giveaways.

If you enjoy books that follow a protagonist through an emotional journey toward greater self-awareness and fulfilment, you probably read a lot of Women’s Fiction, even if you didn’t realize that’s what the industry calls it. Women’s fiction is not necessarily written by women. It’s not fiction written just for women. And it’s not even necessarily fiction about women. But the primary writers and readers seem to be women, and quite often (though not always) the protagonist is female.

But women grow up reading (and continue reading) books written by men about men, so why shouldn’t men read books written by women about women?

What distinguishes Women’s Fiction is that is does not rely on tropes or formulae that genres like Romance or Cozy Mystery or Suspense do. There might be romance, or there might not. There might be a mystery, or there might not. There might be a happy ending, or a story might end in tragedy, or in some bittersweet spot in between.

Women’s Fiction can be contemporary or historical or time-slip or happen in some future imagined time.

It’s a wildly entertaining and wide-ranging genre and I’m excited to introduce to you some authors who may be new to you, so be sure to follow me on Facebook or Instagram to get in on all the Women’s Fiction Day fun. On June 7th, I’ll be posting a TON about other writers, most of whom are running Women’s Fiction Day giveaways on the 8th. Then on June 8th, I’ll also be offering you a way to enter my own giveaway, where you can win a copy of each of my four Women’s Fiction novels.

Be sure to follow and share with your reading friends!

 

Just stopping in so John Steinbeck can say…

My second novel, The Words between Us, is coming out September 3rd!

You may be wondering how you can get the book, support me as an author, or see me in person, so each day for the next four weeks on my Facebook page some literary luminaries from the past are going to make it easy for you. The first is John Steinbeck. Head on over to Facebook and like my author page so you don’t miss any of the rest of them!

And without further ado, here are some ways you can be part of this next book launch!

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Join me at one of my book launch events:

Sept. 3 @ 7pm at Baker Book House on East Paris in Grand Rapids, Michigan

Sept. 5 @ 7pm at Schuler Books & Music in the Meridian Mall in Okemos, Michigan

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Preorder at your local indie bookstore or online:

https://www.indiebound.org/book/9780800734923

https://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/the-words-between-us-erin-bartels/1130543157#/

https://www.amazon.com/Words-between-Us-Erin-Bartels/dp/0800734920/

https://www.christianbook.com/the-words-between-us/erin-bartels/9780800734923/pd/73492X

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Add it to your to-read shelf on Goodreads:

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/43838303-the-words-between-us?ac=1&from_search=true

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Rate and review the book on Goodreads, Bookbub, or Amazon:

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/43838303-the-words-between-us?ac=1&from_search=true

https://www.bookbub.com/books/the-words-between-us-by-erin-bartels?bookstory=3196583

https://www.amazon.com/Words-between-Us-Erin-Bartels/dp/0800734920/

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Join my email newsletter list:

https://erinbartels.us12.list-manage.com/subscribe?u=2d2e97b860f739e577bc95eeb&id=c3578997bb

First Booksigning Is in the Books

Last night was my first live event to support the launch of We Hope for Better Things.

Baker Book House in Grand Rapids, Michigan, was a perfect venue. Not only is it the retail arm of my publishing house, it is a fantastic space with lots of room for events like these.

I didn’t count, but I would estimate that there were around 50 people who came to listen to me jaw on about the importance of knowing our history in order to improve our future.

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There was family — my mom and dad, my aunt, my husband and son, my mother-in-law and father-in-law.

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There were dear friends — girls who were on my Little League softball team and stood in my wedding, and fellow writer-friends I met through WFWA who actually made the trip from Chicago (with two more of their friends) to surprise me (and boy I was surprised!).

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There was a sweet old lady from the church I attended in my early twenties when I lived in Grand Rapids. There were members of my publishing team and people I’d worked with for well over a decade. There were fellow writers I met through my involvement with the Breathe Writers Conference and the Capital City Writers Association.

And there were lots of people I’d never met before. Several of them grew up in Detroit during the 1960s, which is where the book is partially set. One of them actually went to the same high school as my mom did in Detroit at the same time she was there. Those who had already read it said they really enjoyed seeing their childhood come alive in the book. That was really gratifying to me because it means I not only did my research but I got it onto the page in a compelling way.

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All in all, it went well and I know I’ll be less nervous for my next event coming up on January 24th at 7:00pm at Schuler Books & Music in Okemos, MI.

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Also, I want to take a moment to point you to a new page on this website. This events page is where I will be putting information about where I will be in the future, just in case you want to connect in person. You can also find it through the media page in the header of the website, along with pages that link to reviews, interviews and articles, and resources for book clubs.

Thanks for reading!!

Opening the Door to 2019

If you follow me on social media, you know that the past week has been on the busy side, and that it’s not over yet. Christmas celebrations on both sides of the state, time with friends in different cities, my wedding anniversary. Now New Year’s (though we blessedly have zero plans) and my birthday rapidly approach.

And…release day. We Hope for Better Things will be out in the world on its own, like a young bird finally pushed out of the nest into the cold air of the unknown. Today’s podcast is about what that feels like.

That’s little first-grade me in the picture, reading. And for the past few months, I’ve been reading a lot.

 

 

 

 

These are all books that will release in 2019 like mine, with the exception of the first, which is already out, and I’ve enjoyed reading each one of them for different reasons.

Reading has always been important to me. I cannot imagine my life without books. And in the past eight or nine years, writing has been just as important to me. So as I consider what 2019 will bring and make goals for myself, reading and writing figure heavily.

It’s hard to believe we are entering the last year of the twenty-teens. The last year of my 30s. The last day, today, that I will consider myself an unpublished author or an aspiring author. 2019 is sure to bring with it a lot of excitement and opportunity, some stress and probably some overwork, and certainly some disappointments or failures. But one of the things I am sure it will bring in spades is more great books to read, more stories to write. And what book-lover could ask for more?

Thanks for coming along this journey to publication through the storytelling vehicle of this blog. Some of you have been here since 2012. Some came along with me to this space from earlier blogs, starting way back in 2008. Ten years! Ten years of reading my words, looking at my photos, watching me sew, seeing my son grow from a baby to a fifth grader…it’s nuts how quickly the time slips by. And it’s exciting to think about what the next ten years will bring.

I’m so grateful to you for reading this blog and my newsletter.

I’m so grateful to those of you who will read We Hope for Better Things.

I’m so grateful that I get to do what I love and that what I love to do can offer you some pleasure, comfort, laughter, or maybe just a moment to slow down and think.

May the Giver of all good gifts bless you in the coming year with faith, hope, and love. See you in 2019.

Writing Across the Color Line

Last week I did an interview for a couple publications that will be coming out around the time We Hope for Better Things comes out to help spread the word about it. One of the questions the writer asked me is one I expect I will get a lot as people begin to encounter the book:

What did you, a white woman, do to ensure your black characters were authentic?

In answer to that question, I talked about my minor in US History in college and my year of extensive research into the black experience in America before I put pen to paper.

After that, I told her about Nancy, Mary, Debra, and Booker.

At various stages of the writing and revising of the manuscript that would become We Hope for Better Things, I asked black friends and writers to read and critique it, looking specifically for issues with black speech and characterization. Looking for anything that didn’t feel authentic to them, or that smacked of misinformation or stereotype.

Waiting for their critiques was sometimes nerve-wracking, especially since some of them were personal friends, not just other writers.

Today I’m with Nancy Johnson (who is now my critique partner) over on Writer Unboxed talking about how we’ve worked with each other to bring out the best in our writing, specifically how we’ve approached questions of race in our writing.

If you’re a writer who wants to populate your stories with a diverse cast of characters but you’re worried about getting something wrong or unintentionally offending someone, come join the conversation!

If you’re a reader who wonders how writers do what they do, come read about it!

NaNoWriMo Success, a Goodreads Giveaway, and the Return of #Debut19Chat

The past week has been busy in a good way.

I topped 50,000 words in my newest novel manuscript and won National Novel Writing Month for the second time (the result of the first time will actually be my second novel, coming out in September, and which has a shiny new title I can’t wait to share with you).

I finished up several PR items my publicist needed in order to spread the word about We Hope for Better Things.

I actually did my very first interview with a writer for a magazine!

I made much progress on an advance reader copy of The Patricide of George Benjamin Hill by James Charlesworth, another author who will debut in 2019.

dusted. I actually dusted.

I decorated for Christmas.

I did some laundry (finally).

I prepped food for a church potluck.

I started my Advent reading, Wrapped in Grace by Deana Lynn Rogers.

And #Debut19Chat is running again on Twitter, with new questions and answers to get to know 2019 debut authors and their projects.

Now I sit back a moment and consider the reality that 2018 is racing to a close and I have a very busy year ahead of me, in which I have two books coming out (one in just a month!), two books in the process of writing and revising, and I’m directing my beloved WFWA writing retreat.

If you want to keep up with what I’m doing, including my book launch events, speaking and workshops, my podcast, and more, you can get my newsletter in your email inbox by subscribing here.

If you want to enter to win one of ten free copies of We Hope for Better Things, you can enter the Goodreads Giveaway here!

And if you want to listen to me riff about the cute online animal videos I would have attempted to make as a child had the technology been available to me, click here to listen to the latest Your Face Is Crooked podcast episode. Or click the graphic below, which is my husband communing with a goat.

 

1-Week NaNoWriMo Check-Up

We’re one week into National Novel Writing Month and I hope that any of you who are participating are finding success. I’ve been happy with my progress thus far — 15,535 words — and I have to admit it is due to two things: lots of pre-thought and a little pre-writing.

On the pre-thought tip, I’ve been ruminating on this story for at least a couple years, and in the past couple months my disparate ideas codified into something with enough layers and complexity to work for a novel.

As for the pre-writing, in the week or so before November started, I forced myself to write chapter summaries for where I saw the beginning chapters going and managed to get up through chapter 17.

What has that meant for the writing? Well, in this first week I’ve managed just shy of a chapter a day because I already knew the main plot and character points I was going to cover in each. I doubt very much that I can keep up that pace all month with a heavy workload of writing copy for the next catalog and Thanksgiving coming up. But a solid start does wonders for my motivation to push forward, and all those chapter summaries make it easier for me to write in short bursts that I can fit in here and there throughout the day as time presents itself rather than waiting for perfect conditions of a long block of alone time that will not be interrupted.

So what happens when I reach chapter 18 and the summaries are no more? Well, at that point I should be over the halfway point of the novel and the forward momentum of all that story should make the going easier. Plus, I do know the ending already. I may take an hour or so and write out the next five or ten chapter summaries before I go on writing the novel. Or I may find that that would just slow me down.

One thing’s for sure, though. NaNoWriMo came at just the right time for me this year and the progress I’m making on a new story after so much time fiddling with old ones or making false starts on new ones has me feeling much less anxious than I have been in a long time.

National Novel Writing Month Is Coming

Back in 2014, I won National Novel Writing Month. If you’re not familiar with it, NaNoWriMo is “won” by hitting 50,000 words written in a new novel in the month of November. It means you’ve written at least an average of 1,667 words a day for 30 days. And if you’ve never tried it, it is not easy.

Prior to 2014, I didn’t think I could write that fast or write under pressure. But the novel I started drafting back then became what will be my second published novel (in November 2019).

After that success, I tried to attempt NaNoWriMo again, but I was never quite ready at that moment to start something new. But this year, after sending a revision of my current WIP to my agent for her comments, and after thinking and planning and gathering notes on what I want to write next, I think I’m finally ready to tackle it again.

Or I’d better be, because I already signed up to compete.

For me, this may mean getting up early each morning to write before the day gets going. It may mean writing in the evenings instead of reading or watching a show. It may mean spending most of a Saturday at the keyboard. And it may mean all of those things at once!

Why try to write 50,000 words in one month? For me, it’s about momentum. Momentum that will carry me through a crappy first draft that I can then spend a lot more time revising and honing, which is my favorite part of the writing process. After all, you can’t revise what hasn’t yet been written. Plus, I haven’t drafted something totally new in at least two years as I have been focused on revising earlier works and letting my creative well re-fill. It’s time to get moving on a new story with a new cast of characters.

One of the things you do when you officially sign up for NaNoWriMo (at nanowrimo.org) is choose a working title, write a short synopsis, and upload a provisional cover in order to make it all feel more concrete. Here’s mine:

Mel and Ollie Go for a Walk

Sisters Olivia and Melanie Greene were college students on a remote wilderness hiking trip when their parents died in a terrible car crash. They emerged from the isolation of the woods that day only to discover that, except for each other, they were utterly alone in the world.

Ten years later, Melanie insists they mark the occasion by hiking the same trail. Olivia doesn’t see the point. They’ve gone their separate ways in life and now have little in common besides their grief–and their uncanny ability to get on one another’s nerves.

Olivia, a young, hungry lawyer, has retreated into a strictly materialist view of the world–what you see is what you get, and that’s all you get. Melanie, a self-proclaimed life coach and YouTube guru, affirms all spiritual belief systems, just to cover her bases. Neither of them is prepared for what the wilderness is about to throw at them.

As things go from bad to worse on the trail, Mel and Ollie will have to learn to lean on each other and find the right path in order to get back to civilization. Along the way, they will discover just how deep the bond between sisters goes.

I’ve been wanting to write a sister story for a while. And I’ve been wanting to write a hiking story for a while. (No big surprise, considering the fact that I hike with my sister regularly.) The kind of silly working title popped into my head one day and wouldn’t be dislodged, though once the book is written I am sure a better one will emerge. And obviously the very simple cover is just for my benefit (it doesn’t even have my name on it because there’s no good place to put it). But sometimes you have to visualize the finished product in order to make it more real, to make it something you’re willing to put in the work on.

The fun part about this story as I envision it? Taking all of those concerns one has when embarking on a backcountry hiking trip where there is no cell service–the possibility of bear attacks, sudden injury, getting lost, getting caught in the elements, running out of food or water, wildfire, being tracked by a person with ill intent–and throwing some of them at my characters to see how they react and what they learn about life and themselves along the way.

Embarking on NaNoWriMo is a little like taking a hiking trip. You plan as best you can, but you also have to make decisions in the moment. Because you never know what’s around the next bend…

 

Hear Me Bloviate on Publishing!

You may or may not know that my husband, also a writer, is a podcast fiend, both as a listener and as a podcaster himself. He is currently hosting three podcasts (The Gut Check Podcast, Clinch: A Podcast of Fiction and Not-Fiction, and These Go to Eleven) and his sermons are available online as well.

I’ve appeared here and there on the Gut Check Podcast, mostly as a bystander or an interrupter-of-proceedings, though occasionally I am asked direct questions or serve as a reader for Gut Check Literacy Month (which has lasted, oh, I’d say maybe two years). And I bet you can hear my laugh in some of those sermon recordings. But this week Zach actually interviewed me for the not-fiction portion of Clinch.

If you’re curious about what I do in publishing, how annoying I think I will be as an author to the people on my publishing team, or you just want to listen to us talk about Zach getting lost in the woods outside of Owosso, actor Kevin Sorbo, and whether or not we should have closed the drapes to keep our dog from barking during the recording, you should definitely give it a listen.

Also, you should go back to episode one and binge it, both for the fiction portion, where Zach reads his current work in serial fashion, and the not-fiction portion, which gives you an inside look into the highs and lows of publishing, both traditionally and independently, from Zach’s own rollercoaster experience and interviews with other authors. It’s one of the most honest assessments you’ll get of what it’s like to be a writer trying to make a mark in the book world today.